GOOD NEWS!

The black bear stood menacingly standing right on my path, his head locked on me. I could hardly move or speak. He jumped in the air about to pounce... on me.

Now, what does this paragraph tell you? For your information, this is not a sneak peek or anything like that. It was just to see how good at writing I have got, my writing style is good (in my opinion) and it will always have room for improvement.

The Point of this Post

So there is one MAIN thing about this post. The good news is I am making a new post series!

Note: The Venture of Ginger McNeader (so hard to type,) is going to be delayed because I will try to make it longer and more descriptive as well as more engaging.

The Post series

This post is actually the first of the series and will be heavily focusing on how to make my writing better. You all are a part of it making sure how I can view it differently. I think we can get going on this now.

So, The black bear stood menacingly standing right on my path, his head locked on me. I could hardly move or speak. He jumped in the air about to pounce... on me. Now to make it better.

I should probably make it longer right at this point, I could hardly move or speak my brain banged inside of my head to run, a chill shivered up my spine, as I still stood with fear.

Now that was better in my opinion but, it still has room to improve, how about at the end? The bear jumped in the air about to pounce... on me my eyes opened up larger than ever as I realized, I had no escape.

Ok, now to put it together.

The black bear stood menacingly standing right on my path, his head locked on me. I could hardly move or speak my brain banged inside of my head to run, a chill shivered up my spine, as I still stood with fear. The bear jumped in the air about to pounce... on me my eyes opened up larger than ever as I realized, I had no escape...

Thanks for reading! I am going to try and make this bigger and better.- Scrib