A New Writing Style...

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I jumped over a cart almost pushing it over as I headed away from the pursuing cops,

"Come back here, you backstabbing thief!" One of the cops said

Of course, I had no idea what he was talking about, but I guess you need a rewind

The chase started when I was near a market when two cops started chasing me, thinking I was in trouble I ran. I know you would too. Local law enforcement is thin around here and when they do come they get the wrong person.

Meanwhile back at the chase...

I now saw a brown walled building filled with paintings. Beautiful painting, as I thought

'This is the rich side of town, man this is truly amazing', You may not know but, I am a fan of art anything, in particular, painting, sculptures, and more.

"Get over here! NOW!" The officer shouts now in my sight.

About to dash off in a moment's notice he cuffed me midair a sight to see indeed.

"Aw man," I muttered as he nudged me to the station...

Well that was longer than the last episode's, so let's get started

One thing I noticed is that everything was grouped up making it a little confusing to read but, that's fixed now let's go!

I now saw the brown walled building. Ok, one thing we need to do is take out the painting part we don't need that. Now we need to edit the sentence,

I saw the brown walls on my sides, it was very high and menacing and made me get a bad feeling. I just stared at the wall in total fear.

It was better now, let's keep going.

Now reading this I think we need to add something. In the end,

I now walk to the run-down police station, the government didn't really care about the police. They themselves were corrupt as a guard shocked me.

When I woke up, I was above lava slowly going down into the pit...

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That was a better ending but, these posts don't only consist of me improving my writing. Sure, it's fun to read but after a while it gets boring. So I'll spice things up with an announcement now and then.

The Courage Of Fear Chapter One is coming!

Courage Of Fear is coming!

After this hold-up of one book every three days, we have books ready for you to read.

Why the hold-up Scrib?

Well, since we want every author to make a good regular-sized book that has all the things you need. Even though we did barely make it for each day, it was rushing us to make these books. Now that we space things out we hope you read every book.

Now back to the editing, also wait for an announcement at the end!

The chase started when I was near a market buying groceries when two cops started chasing me. I thought I was in trouble so I ran as fast as I can, they also never get the right person.

I know you would too in my situation. Local law enforcement is thin around here and when they do come they don't do anything well.

I admit, I copied and pasted this paragraph then edited it. This was a long part of the story so I'm glad I edited that.

But wait!

Before you think we're done we are going to add more of the story (not as much though).

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I swung back and forth over the lava trying to get to the floor where the cops stand. If you're wondering the cops went to lunch. I need to eat lunch soon too.

I remembered my family and tried to step on the floor it was no use I need to go lower.

'DEPARTMENT OF CITY JUSTICE'

a sign says, as I finished reading it I just hopelessly looked at it,

'How ironic' I thought, 'They give injustice getting the wrong person while saying they are making justice.'

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Now to edit it, first off the first sentence needs some improvement.

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I swung back and forth trying to jump onto the floor where the cops would usually stand, but since they went to lunch I might be able to escape.

'I have been wronged, I have been wronged' I kept thinking, not trying to think about death. I looked around to keep my mind distracted

'DEPARTMENT OF CITY JUSTICE'

a sign says, as I finished reading it I just hopelessly looked at it,

'How ironic' I thought, 'They give injustice getting the wrong person while saying they are making justice.'

I look down to see I was about to touch the lava...

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Now to the exciting announcement!

Now I said that we were doing one book every three days right? Well, I came up with an idea, we will release two or three books at the SAME time!

You might not be excited but, all the books are going to be in the same post, meaning that we can give you the same amount of content before the break (I said about) without one book overshadowing another.

Even More Exciting News!

The sequel has come, the legends are back, and War for Peace Two is here in MLEGENDS HOME!

That's right Me and TMD are working on the newest, War For Peace Series!

The name? The Final Hopes, you might have not known but, we love making War For Peace as much as you love to read it! Here is the trailer,

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New villains have arisen, new heroes as well, the balance of the realm is centered around the trio now. With new allies and enemies can they win the War for Peace...

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Really good right?

Well, expect to see the first episode of The Final Hopes (War for Peace 2) and the Courage of Fear with another book this Sunday.

Now for the outro

Hey, thanks for reading!

Today we checked out how my writing is improving and a lot of important information.

Make sure to check out other book and posts of my and others, and making to comment if you are a member. It really helps us stay focused and determined.

This has been my second 4 min read and I hope you enjoy this post and everything we do.

Stay tuned-Scrib